S.S. Rose

Thanks for the comment! Just in regards to that last bit, this is actually a stand-alone piece. I was trying (perhaps not successfully) to convey in the abruptness of the ...

Greg -- this poem actually had nothing to do with God, aside from the biblical allusions scattered throughout. For example, the title is the latin phrase for "way of grief", ...

Hello Elinor! Thanks for reviewing my poem! Yes, it was very unclear and cryptic -- sorry 'bout that. "Sylvia" refers to the author/poet Sylvia Plath, whom I just had the ...

Hello everyone, and thanks for the reviews. First off, the "tears on paper" image is supposed to convey tears (as in moisture; weeping) being absorbed by paper as one bends ...

Hello Francis Michael Buck, I loved your poem. It was frightening and real and relevant. Very, very nice. In my mind, the Fox was death, chasing me with bared, bloody ...

Empressoftheuniverse - I just wanted to clear something up: And bring this temple down with ease In this line, it is implied that the body itself is a temple, devastated ...

Amazing, Amazing, AMAZING!! Like, I want to frame this and hang it up in my room. Sorry, I have no constructive criticism, lilchoma, but quite frankly I don't care. I ...